Zao chen, I am Manvi from St Mary’s School. I really liked how this was based on something from Fiji and how you were creative. This reminds me of what our class made based on the Titanoboa where we could be creative and make our own snake. Maybe next time you could write more things about it and how it is dangerous. Please visit my blog here
Hi Rylee I think your creation is very interesting. Maybe you could add something about what it eats or how you got the idea to make it. Good job! From Eva
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Zao chen, I am Manvi from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how this was based on something from Fiji and how you were creative.
This reminds me of what our class made based on the Titanoboa where we could be creative and make our own snake.
Maybe next time you could write more things about it and how it is dangerous.
Please visit my blog
here
Mā te wā
Manvi.
Hi Rylee
ReplyDeleteI think your creation is very interesting.
Maybe you could add something about what it eats or how you got the idea to make it.
Good job!
From Eva
Hi I´m Cormac.
ReplyDeleteI really like your creation, I think it´s really funny. it was really well photo-shopped and the dog head is cute.
Kia ora Rylee I think your creature is very weird but interesting. Maybe next add more full stops and some punctuation. Mahi pai Capri
ReplyDeleteKia ora. I am Joshua from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your creativity.
Maybe you could say what you were learning .
Please visit my blog
here
Mā te wā
Joshua