Friday, 31 July 2020

5 Resons Why Living In The Country Is Better Than Town

With some of our writing with Mrs Bennett we did persuasive writing which is a type of writing when you and another person is debating on something like e.g Zoos should be banned.
We are trying to convince our audience to think something the same way as us and see our point of view.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Rylee my name is Tamzyn, I really like your post on why living in the country is better than living in town. I used to live in town but now I live in the country maybe next time you could add more detail.

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  2. Ni Hao, I am Manvi from St Mary’s School.
    I really liked how you have convinced me that the country has more potential than the townhouses.
    The facts you have used are very superb and convincing, especially the one about schools because I had never known.
    Maybe next time you could write the pros and cons of living in the country from your point of view.
    Please visit my blog
    here

    Mā te wā
    Manvi.

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Positive - something done well
Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about