Wednesday, 22 April 2020

Anzac Day



I thought I might do some things to do for Anzac day and this is what I did . . .

2 comments:

  1. Hi Rylee
    It is lovely to commemorate Anzac day with your writing. I love the gradient sky effect along with the silhouette of the soldier. It looks very effective.
    The rhyming pattern of your verse gives a lovely rhythm as you read. I feel a connection with the last line as I always feel very emotional on Anzac day when I see the old soldiers and think about the sacrifices they made during the war.
    Well done
    Mrs Bennett

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  2. Hi Mrs Bennett
    Thank you so much reading and looking at my blog post. I make the very same connection on the last line, I'm sure lot's of others could make the very same connection.
    Thanks
    Rylee

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