Hi Rylee It is lovely to commemorate Anzac day with your writing. I love the gradient sky effect along with the silhouette of the soldier. It looks very effective. The rhyming pattern of your verse gives a lovely rhythm as you read. I feel a connection with the last line as I always feel very emotional on Anzac day when I see the old soldiers and think about the sacrifices they made during the war. Well done Mrs Bennett
Hi Mrs Bennett Thank you so much reading and looking at my blog post. I make the very same connection on the last line, I'm sure lot's of others could make the very same connection. Thanks Rylee
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Hi Rylee
ReplyDeleteIt is lovely to commemorate Anzac day with your writing. I love the gradient sky effect along with the silhouette of the soldier. It looks very effective.
The rhyming pattern of your verse gives a lovely rhythm as you read. I feel a connection with the last line as I always feel very emotional on Anzac day when I see the old soldiers and think about the sacrifices they made during the war.
Well done
Mrs Bennett
Hi Mrs Bennett
ReplyDeleteThank you so much reading and looking at my blog post. I make the very same connection on the last line, I'm sure lot's of others could make the very same connection.
Thanks
Rylee