Friday, 2 August 2019

Amazing Taniwha Slow Writing

Kia Ora, this master piece of writing is called slow writing and I did it on Taniwha's. Slow writing is when you use something different in each sentence (something descriptive.) I hope you enjoy reading my writing.

Claws are as shiny as gold.Slowly creeping into the village square.Sharpening their claws on trees.“Kia ora I’m the big scary Taniwha also known as king of the lagoon.”In the village square under a tall apple tree where I sharpen my claws.

This blog post shows that I'm a Stepping Up Blogger.

I hope you enjoyed reading my Taniwha slow writing.
Have you ever done slow writing before?

By Rylee


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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous9 August 2019 at 11:59

    I love your art work its amazing you must of Spent a long time on it because its really cool.
    From your buddy Jaymee.

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  2. Anonymous2 September 2019 at 06:52

    Thank you Jaymee I love to here that you enjoyed reading my blog and like my art work. Thank you so much for commenting on this blog post.
    From your buddy Rylee

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