Monday, 23 November 2020

Summer Learning Journey Descriptive Writing

 The next step of learning about the summer learning journey was to find another picture, colour it in and describe it. e.g shapes, lines, colours, texture, whats in the background... 




You can see that this drawing is pretty plain. But the paint has a good texture on the pyramid and a little bit of texture on the sand. The background is just a blue sky with the pyramid and sand. My eye catches onto the little mountains on the right hand side far back behind the pyramid. There are lines that separate the sky from the sand and the 3 dimensional triangle. The colours there are not to many of either but they blend together nicely and they look good side by side.







3 comments:

  1. Kia ora Rylee,
    Well done on using the elements of art to describe this.
    from Mrs Torrie

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  2. Hi Rylee
    I really like how you used the elements of art to describe your work.
    Next time you could add more detail to your art.
    - Capri

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  3. Hi Rylee
    I like your art it describes your work but next time you could maybe add some detail.
    from Carla

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